牛津译林版高中英语单元复习学案Unit 1 Laughter is good for you(译林牛津版高三英语必修五学案设计)

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词汇导练

1.She____________(举起)her finger to her lips as a sign for silence.

2.Books offer an excellent ____________(消遣)for idle hours.

3.This is an ___________(出色的)performance.

4.The most ____________(紧急的)thing in a fire is to make sure everyone is out of the building.

5.We were ____________(逗乐的)to see his face covered in thick cream.

6.This isn’t the a____________ time to discuss the problem.We can do it another time.

7.The parents are often a____________ with their naughty child.

8.The Spring Festival is drawing near,and all the railway stations are c____________ with people.

9.I can’t stand people with no sense of____________(幽默).

10.He e____________ us with a series of jokes about John.

11.The singer got an e____________ reception.

12.she burst into____________(laugh)at the joke.

1.raised 2.entertainment 3.outstanding 4.emergent 5.amused 6.appropriate 7.annoyed 8.crowded 9.humour 10.entertained 11.enthusiastic 12.laughter

短语汇集

1.________________   取笑,拿……开玩笑

2.________________ 对……作出反应

3.________________ 排队,列队

4.________________ 接受,雇用

5.________________ 结对,两人一组

6.________________ 发生,进行

7.________________ 不久以后

8.________________ 接下去,继续

9.________________ 腾出地方,让出地方

10.________________ 一卷

1.make fun of 2.in response to 3.queue up 4.take on,5.in pairs 6.go on 7.soon after 8.move on 9.make room 10.a roll of

语句试译

1.(回归课本P3)________ seems appropriate ________he got his start in silent films!

看来,他不愧是从无声电影起步的啊!

2.(回归课本P11)So,if you want to try crosstalk lessons,________ ________ ________with a real old master!

所以,如果你想要学相声,为什么不跟一个真正的老相声大师学呢!

3.(回归课本P3)________ ________ ________,research shows that in the end,the English saying‘Laughter is the best medicine’may be true after all.

不管是什么原因,研究最后表明,英语格言“笑是最好的药”毕竟可能是正确的。

4.(回归课本P14)________ ________I sit down?

我坐下你介意吗?

5.(回归课本P14)(Mike)moves over as if______ ______ _____.(麦克)挪过去,好像是要腾出空间。

1.It;that 2.why not study 3.Whatever the reason 4.Mind if 5.to make room

核心知识

1.award vt. 授予;判给;裁定

n. 奖,奖品;奖金

(回归课本P2)People around the world enjoy watching him when he hosts the Academy Awards.

全世界的人们都喜欢看他主持奥斯卡颁奖庆典。

归纳拓展

例句探源

①(牛津P119)He was nominated for the best actor award.

他获得最佳演员提名奖。

②(朗文P116)After seven years in court,he was awarded $ 750,000 compensation.

经过七年的诉讼,他获得了75万美元的赔偿。

③Prizes will be awarded to the top three runners.

跑前3名的人将获奖。

易混辨析

award,reward,prize

(1)award n.&v.指为鼓励在工作中达到所提出的要求或条件的人而进行的奖励,往往强调荣誉而不在乎奖品的大小或奖金的多少。

(2)reward n.&v.指对某人的工作或服务等的报答。也指因帮助警方抓到罪犯或帮助失主找到东西而得到的酬金、赏金。

(3)prize n.多指在各类竞赛、竞争或抽奖中所赢得的奖品。这种奖赏有的凭能力获得,有的凭运气获得。

(4)award与reward都可表示“给予”。award强调“授予”(奖章、奖金等),后面可接两个宾语:被授予的人和所授的奖励;reward则强调“报酬”,只能以人或人的行为作宾语,如果要说明因何获得报酬,须加with/for短语。

1.用award,reward或prize的正确形式填空

(1)He received a________of $ 900 from the police for catching the criminal.

答案:reward

(2)The university________her a scholarship.

答案:awarded

(3)He won first________/________in the singing contest.

答案:prize/award

2.routine n. 常规,惯例;常规节目

(回归课本P2)Each time,he performs his standup routine in front of millions of people when the show is broadcast live on TV.

每一次电视直播时,全世界有数百万观众都能看到他现场表演的单口喜剧。

归纳拓展

①n.惯例,常规

②adj.惯常的,定期的,例行的

例句探源

①(朗文P1783)The daily routine starts early,around 6∶00 a.m..

一天的生活从清晨6点左右就早早开始了。

②(牛津P1743)The fault was discovered during a routine check.

这个错误是在一次常规检查中发现的。

易混辨析

habit,custom,customs,routine

habit指一个人在长时间内逐渐养成的一时不易改变的行为或习惯;custom则强调社会民族经过一个较长时间的过程而形成的“风俗,习惯”;customs为复数名词,意思是“关税,进口税”,当首字母大写并与the连用时表示“海关”的意思;routine例行公事;惯例;常规;daily routine每天要做的事情;日课

2.用habit,customs,custom,routine填空:

(1)He has formed the________of saving money.

答案:habit

(2)Social________vary greatly from country to country.

答案:customs

(3)We’re trying to get the baby into a________for feeding and sleeping.

答案:routine

3.live adv.& adj. 现场直播的;精力充沛的;活的;生动的

vt.& vi. 实践,身体力行;居住;生存

(回归课本P2)Each time,he performs his standup routine in front of millions of people when the show is broadcast live on TV.

每一次电视直播时,全世界有数百万观众都能看到他现场表演的单口喜剧。

归纳拓展

例句探源

①(朗文P1206)They are compaigning against experiments on live animals.

他们正在开展反对活体动物实验的运动。

②We’ll be broadcasting the programme live from Washington.

我们将从华盛顿现场直播该节目。

③It was the first inter view I’d done in front of a live audience.

那是我首次在观众面前做现场采访。

④She lived a very peaceful life.

她过着十分宁静的生活。

⑤Small birds live mainly on insects.

小鸟主要靠食昆虫为生。

易混辨析

live,alive,living,lively

(1)live作形容词时,常用于物且作定语,表示“活的,活着的,现场直播的”。

(2)alive作表语、后置定语或宾语补足语,多用于人,表示“活着的,活的”。

(3)living表示“活着的,逼真的”,指人或物,在句中作表语或前置定语。

(4)lively在句中作表语或定语,表示“有生气的;活泼的;生动的”,既可修饰人又可修饰物。

①Is she still alive?

②He’s the living image of his father.

③He has a lively imagination.

3.用live,alive,living或lively填空:

(1)The club has________music most nights.

答案:live

(2)The fish we caught is still________.

答案:alive

(3)The only season that makes one feel________is the spring.

答案:lively

(4)All________things need sunlight.

答案:living

4.worthwhile adj. 值得的

(回归课本P9)Writing is tough work,but I hope it will all be worthwhile,...

写作是项艰难的工作,可是我希望它都是值得做的,……

归纳拓展

(1)worthwhile分开写时,while前可加one’s或the,即worth one’s/the while。

The work is worth the/your/Jack’s while.

这工作值得做/值得你做/值得杰克做。

(2)be worthwhile to do sth./doing sth.值得做某事

It’s worthwhile for sb.to do sth.某人值得做某事。

例句探源

①(牛津P2328)It is worthwhile to include really highquality illuastrations.

把真正高质量的插图包括进去是值得的。

②(朗文P2372)Programs like this one get kids involved in worthwhile activities.

这样的一些课程能让孩子们参与到有价值的活动中来。

易混辨析

worthwhile,worth,worthy

(1)worthwhile值得;指花时间去做某事是值得的。可作表语、定语或补语。

worthy可作表语也可作定语,作定语时意为:有价值的,值得尊敬的,应受到赏识的。

4.In my opinion,this kind of works can’t represent Chinese culture,so it’s not worth ________.

A.publishing        

B.being published

C.to be published

D.to publish

解析:选A。be worth doing用主动语态表达被动含义。

5.一句多译

他证明他是值得信赖的。

_______________________________________

5.tear vt. 撕,扯

n. (常用复数)眼泪

(回归课本P15)(The king)tears the paper in two.

(国王)把文件撕成了两半。

归纳拓展

例句探源

①(朗文P2114)Celia grabbed the envelope and tore it open.

西莉亚一把夺过来信封,把它撕开了。

②They’re finally tearing down that old house on State Street.

他们终于要拆掉国家大道的那座老房子了。

③(牛津P2074)She left the room in tears.

她哭着离开了房间。

④Their story will move you to tears.

他们的故事会使你感动得流泪。

6.完成句子

(1)小男孩从广告牌上扯下一张海报。

The little boy ______ _______ a poster from the advertisement board.

答案:tore down

(2)他气愤地将信撕碎,扔到废纸篓里。

He ________ _____ _____ _______ ________ angrily and threw it into the wastepaper basket.

答案:tore the letter into pieces

(3)她撕这块布,但是没有撕开。

She_____at the cloth but couldn’t_____it open.

答案:tore;tear

6.burst vi. 破裂;爆发;突然发生;突然发作

vt. 使破裂,使破口

n. (感情等的)爆发

(回归课本P15)Servant bursts in,next to Queen,emptyhanded,shrugs shoulders.

仆人突然闯了进来,站在王后身边,空着手,耸了耸肩膀。

归纳拓展

burst into+n. 突然(开始做某事)

burst out doing突然出现;突然发生

burst into laughter=burst out laughing 突然大笑起来

burst into tears=burst out crying 突然大哭起来,burst forth 突然爆发,冒出

burst in(on/upon) 突然插嘴,打扰,突然闯入

例句探源

①(牛津P261)The aircraft crashed and burst into flames.

飞机坠毁后猛烈燃烧起来。

②He burst in on the meeting.

他闯进来打断了会议。

③(朗文P256)Rubin burst out laughing as he read the letter.

鲁宾读信的时候突然大笑起来。

⑤The door burst open and the kids piled into the house.

门突然开了,孩子们一拥而入。

7.完成句子

(1)那女孩一看见母亲,便失声大哭。

Instantly the girl saw her mother,she ________ ________ ________.

答案:burst out crying

(2)当这个电影名星出现时,人群中爆发出欢呼声。

When the film star turned up,the crowd ________ ________ ________.

答案:burst into cheers

(3)她的门被猛地推开,警察冲了进来。

Her door was thrust open,and the police ________ ________.

答案:burst in

8.He______on our conversation with the news _____we would have a listening test next week.

A.burst out;which  B.burst in;that

C.burst forth;which D.burst up;that

解析:选B。句意:“他打断了我们的谈话,告诉我们一个消息,下周要进行听力测试。”第一空是固定搭配burst in on打断,打扰,突然插话,第二空是that引导的同位语从句,修饰news。

7.make fun of

(回归课本P2)A standup comedian may make fun of an audience member,or he or she might decide to tell different jokes in response to the reactions of an audience.

单口喜剧演员可能就某一观众开玩笑,或是根据观众的反应讲不同的笑话。

归纳拓展

例句探源

①(牛津P827)It’s cruel to make fun of people who stammer.

嘲笑口吃的人是很不人道的。

②We had a lot of fun at Sarah’s party.

我们在萨拉的聚会上玩得很开心。

③Encourage your children to read all kinds of books for fun.

鼓励你的孩子阅读各种各样的书籍来寻找乐趣。

9.________it is to jump into a river in summer!

A.How a fun       

B.What a fun

C.How fun

D.What fun

解析:选D。fun是名词,所以要用what来感叹,同时fun又是不可数名词,故其前不可用a修饰,所以选D。

10.完成句子

(1)人们拿她开玩笑,因为她戴着一顶古怪的帽子。

People________ ________ ________her because she wore a strange hat.

答案:made fun of

(2)由于她总是很严肃,所以受到其他孩子的嘲笑。

She ________ ________ ________ ________by the other children because she was always serious.

答案:was made fun of

(3)他们做这些事不仅为了省钱,也为了乐趣。

They do these things________/________ ________as well as for economy.

答案:for/in fun

(4)祝你在今晚的晚会上玩得开心。

________ ________at the party tonight.

答案:Have fun

(5)在冰上走很有趣。

It is________ ________to walk on ice.

答案:great fun

8.in response to... 对……作出反应

(回归课本P2)A standup comedian may make fun of an audience member,or he or she might decide to tell different jokes in response to the reactions of an audience.

单口喜剧演员可能就某一观众开玩笑,或是根据观众的反应讲不同的笑话。

归纳拓展

(1)in response to 对……作出反应

make a quick response to对……作出很快的反应

make/give no response (to) (对……)没有作出回答/反应

(2)respond vi. 回答,作答;回应,作出反应respond to响应;回答

respond by doing sth. 通过做某事作出反应respond to sb. with 用……回答某人

例句探源

①She said she was writing in response to an ad in the paper.

她说她是看了报纸上的广告才写信的。

②(牛津P1699)She made no response.

她没作任何回答。

③I received an encouraging response to my advertisement.

我的广告宣传有了令人鼓舞的回应。

11.完成句子

(1)公司对消费者的抱怨作出反应,将汽车降价5%。

The company reduced the price of the cars by 5% ________ ________ ________ the customers’complaints.

答案:in response to

(2)政府对那件事没有作出任何反应。

The government ________ ________ ________ to the matter.

答案:made no response

(3)我请他喝酒,但他未作回答。

I offered him a drink but he didn’t ________.

答案:respond

9.take on  接受;雇用;呈现;露面;承担

(回归课本P11)In an interview,he told us that he is always happy to take on new foreign students.

在一次采访中,他告诉我们说他随时都乐于接受外国学生。

归纳拓展

take sb.on 聘用;雇用

take sth.on 呈现;具有(特征,外观等)

take sb./sth.on 决定做;同意负责;承担(责任、工作)等;接纳(乘客);装载(货物等)

take after sb.(外貌或行为)像(父或母);追赶,跟踪take sth.away 解除,消除(感情、痛苦等)

take away from sth.减少;减弱;贬低

take sb.in留宿,收留;欺骗;蒙骗

take sth.in吸入,吞入(体内);改小(衣服);包括,包含

take off(飞机)起飞;匆忙离开;大受欢迎,迅速流行

take sth.over(from sb.)接收,接管(企业、公司等);接替,接任;控制;接管(政党、国家等)

take up继续,接下去;拿起;从事

例句探源

①(牛津P2059)She was taken on as a trainee.

她受聘当实习生。

②(牛津P2059)His voice took on a more serious tone.

他说话的语气变得严肃起来。

③(朗文P2100)If you agree to take on this project,it’ll mean a lot of extra work.

你如果同意承接这项工程,这将意味着大量的超时工作。

12.完成句子

(1)她从北京大学毕业以后,开始从事英语教学工作。

She started________ ________English teaching after she graduated from Beijing University.

答案:taking up

(2)他无家可归,所以我们收留了他。

He was homeless,so we________ ________ ________.

答案:took him in

(3)你为什么要从事业余工作?

Why do you________ ________a parttime job?

答案:take on

(4)北京现在展露出了一种新的面貌。

Beijing has________ ________a new look now.

答案:taken on

(5)我得到了一些止痛药片。

I was given some pills to ________ ________the pain.

答案:take away

(6)她的一番花言巧语完全把我蒙骗住了。

She ________ ________ ________ completely with her story.

答案:took me in

(7)这份新杂志真是大受欢迎。

The new magazine has really __________ ________.

答案:taken off

10.glare at  对……怒目而视

(回归课本P15)He glares at Queen.

他生气地瞪着王后。

例句探源

①(朗文P877)Lilly just glared at me when I asked her what was wrong.

当我问莉莉出了什么事时,她只是对我怒目而视。

②(牛津P863)He didn’t shout;he just glared at me silently.

他没有喊叫,只是默默地怒视着我。

易混辨析

glare,stare,glance

(1)glare意为“怒目而视”,后接介词at。

(2)stare意为“凝视,吃惊地看”,后接介词at,into。

(3)glance意为“匆匆一瞥”,后接介词at,over。

13.I don’t think Jim saw me;he ________ into space.

A.just stared     B.was just staring

C.has just stared D.had just stared

解析:选B。句意:我认为吉姆没有看见我,他当时正注视着天空。由句意可知应用过去进行时态,表示过去某一时刻正在进行的动作或存在的状态。

14.The little boy ________ the rich lady when she refused to give him any food.

A.glanced at B.stared at

C.glared at D.looked at

解析:选C。由下文中的“拒绝给他任何吃的”故应用glared at表示“怒目而视”。

11.hold out  拿出;维持;守住;伸出

(回归课本P15)(The servant)holds out a roll of toilet paper.

(仆人)拿出一卷卫生纸。

归纳拓展

hold up延迟;支撑;阻碍;使停顿

hold on坚持;(打电话)不挂断

hold on to抓住,不放手;不放弃拥有,不让出

hold back阻止;抑制(感情等)

hold to(使)坚持(原则、方向等);紧握

hold together在一起,成为整体;团结在一起

例句探源

①(牛津P974)We can stay here for as long as our supplies hold out.

我们可以在这里一直呆到储备品用完。

②(朗文P991)For ten weeks the troops have held out against mortar attacks.

10周以来,部队一直顶住了迫击炮的攻击。

③Putting down his shopping bag,Will held out his hand,and the cat came up to him.

威尔放下购物袋,伸出手,小猫向他走过来。

15.完成句子

(1)我们的供应还能维持多久?

How much longer can our supplies________ ________?

答案:hold out

(2)新公路的建造由于天气不好而耽搁下来了。

The building of the new road has been________ ________by bad weather.

答案:held up

(3)请稍等,我去拿一支笔来。

________ ________a minute-I’ll just get a pen.

答案:Hold on

(4)你一定对我隐瞒着什么。

You must be________something________from me.

答案:holding;back

(5)你应该继续保留你的石油股份。

You should________ ________ ________your oil shares.

答案:hold on to

16.-Is Peter there?

-________,please.I’ll see if I can find him for you.

A.Hold up        B.Hold on

C.Hold out D.Hold off

解析:选B。hold on意为“不要挂断,请等一会儿”,符合句意,其余选项均不是打电话时的用语。

17. (2011年西安中学模拟) ________ a moment and I will go to your rescue.

A.Go on B.Hold on

C.Move on D.Carry on

解析:选B。go on继续;hold on抓住不放,坚持;move on继续前进;carry on 继续进行。根据后半句的I will go to your rescue可知,这里应是“坚持住,别松手”。

句型解析

1【教材原句】 It seems appropriate that he got his start in silent films!(P3)

看来,他不愧是从无声电影起步的啊!

【句法分析】 it作形式主语,真正主语为后面的that引导的从句。

It作形式主语的句型:

(1)It takes sb.some time to do sth.

(2)It+be+adj.+to do/thatclause

常用的形容词有possible,necessary,important,strange,natural等。

(3)It+be+n.+to do/thatclause

常用的名词有a pity,an honour,a shame,one’s duty,a wonder等。

(4)It+be+adj.(n.)+doing sth.

常用于此句型的名词和形容词有no good,no use,useless等。

(5)It+be+过去分词+thatclause

常用于本句型的过去分词有said,announced,believed,reported,known,hoped等。

18.(2010年高考天津卷)As a new graduate,he doesn’t know________it takes to start a business here.

A.how          B.what

C.when D.which

解析:选B。句意:作为一名新毕业生,他不知道创业需要什么。it take sth.to do sth.“花费……干某事”,本题考查宾语从句,且从句中take缺少宾语,故用what。

19.(2009年高考天津卷)It is obvious to the students________they should get well prepared for their future.

A.as B.which

C.whether D.that

解析:选D。句意:显然,学生们应该为他们的未来做好充分的准备。that引导主语从句,在从句中不作句子成分,it是形式主语。as引导定语从句或状语从句;which引导名词性从句时意为“哪个(些)”;whether,“是否”,此句中如用此词,则语义矛盾。

20.(2009年高考上海卷)It is not immediately clear________the financial crisis will soon be over.

A.since B.what

C.when D.whether

解析:选D。句意:金融危机是否很快结束不会立刻明朗的。因从句中有时间状语soon,故排除C项。句中不缺少主语、表语、故排除B项。whether,“是否”,为连词,引导真实主语从句,it为形式主语。

21.________is known to us all is that the 2012 Olympic Games will take place in London.

A.It B.What

C.As D.Which

解析:选B。句意:我们都知道,2012年奥运会在伦敦举行。此题由一个主语从句is known to us all和一个表语从句that the 2012 Olympic...组成,主语从句中缺少主语,用what指代这一事件。注意本题可以转化为It is known to us all,the 2012 Olympic Games will...(It作形式主语);或As is known to us all,the 2012 Olympic Games will...(As引导非限制性定语从句)。

2【教材原句】 So,if you want to try crosstalk lessons,why not study with a real old master!(P11)

所以,如果你要想尝试学习相声课程,为什么不向真正的年长大师学习呢!

【句法分析】 Why not do...?=Why don’t you do...?

(1)为什么不做……呢?(提出去做某事的建议)

(2)好啊!(表示赞同对方的建议)

-I won’t go on a picnic.

我不去野餐了。

-Why not?

为什么不去?

-Let’s go to the movies.

我们去看电影吧。

-Why not?

好啊。

22.完成句子

(1)为什么你不把业余时间花在集邮上呢?

________ ________ ________your spare time collecting stamps?

答案:Why not spend

(2)你伤得很厉害,为什么不服些药呢?

You’re badly hurt,________ ________you take some medicine?

答案:why don’t

23.(2011年南昌调研)-How about going to a concert this weekend?

-________?It’s a few months since I enjoyed myself in the last one.

A.Why       B.Why not

C.What for D.What

解析:选B。句意:--这周末去听音乐会怎么样?--好啊!我得有几个月没好好享受一下了。why not表示赞同对方建议“好啊!”。

3【教材原句】 Mind if I sit down?(P14)

你介意我坐下吗?

【句法分析】 本句是省略句,完整的形式是Do you mind if I sit down?

常用Would/Do you mind...来提出请求或征求意见,基本结构有:

【温馨提示】

注意其回答:

(1)表示不介意:

Oh,no,please./Certainly not./Absolutely not./Definitely not./Of course not./Not at all./Not a bit./No,go ahead.

(2)表示介意:

I’m sorry,but I do./Yes,I do mind./I’m sorry,but you’d better not.

-Would you mind my smoking here?

--你介意我在这儿抽烟吗?

-I’m sorry,but you’d better not.

--对不起,你最好不要。

24.一句多译

你介意我把门关上吗?

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

答案:(1)Would you mind my/me closing the door?

(2)Would you mind if I closed the door?

25.(2010年高考浙江卷)-Would she mind playing against her former teammates?

-________She is willing to play against any touch players.

A.I think so.   B.I’m not surprised.

C.Of course. D.Not likely!

解析:选D。句意:--她介意和从前的队友打球吗?--不可能,她愿意和任何有风格的球员打球。not likely“不太可能”。

26.-Do you mind turn the volume down?

-________,as a matter of fact.

A.Go ahead B.Yes,my pleasure

C.Yes.I do D.Come on

解析:选C。句意:--你介意我调低音量吗?--事实上,我介意。as a matter of fact表示和上文构成转折,所以应该是介意。故选C。

作文指导

议论文

【体裁导航】

写议论文要注意三个问题:

1.议论文要有论点、论据和论证三个环节(即三个要素),并在论证的过程中,让阅卷老师充分感受到你的英语水平。

2.议论文的时态比较灵活,应根据具体内容使用正确的时态。

3.英语的议论文受篇幅限制,短文开头就应提出论点。

杂议短评类的议论文,就是指通过语言或文字,对某一现象进行议论,或对所读的材料进行评

析,并通过议论,从而提出自己独到见解的分析文章。也就是我们平常所说的“小论文”。

杂议和短评本身并无实质性的区别,只是其范畴有时可能存在一定的差异而已。例如,某年的上海高考英语题,就曾要求对孩子被溺爱的现象进行杂议或短评。近几年北京的开放作文,也多属杂议或短评类的一种书面表达形式。

【写作示例】

健康是福。但是随着人们生活水平的提高,生活节奏的加快,越来越多的人喜欢吃形形色色的简单快捷的包装食品;交通工具的改进也使得人们越来越缺少必需的体力运动。所以出现了很多的“亚健康(subhealth)”人群。请你以“How to Be Healthy?”为题,写一篇120词左右的短文,就此事发表一下你的看法。

【写作要领】

一、审题要点:

1.体裁:议论文;

2.时态:一般现在时;

3.人称:第一人称。

二、内容要点:

1.描述出目前存在的问题:食物方面:吃快餐;运动方面:缺乏体力运动;

2.这些问题造成的后果:亚健康(描述一些症状);

3.提出自己的建议:多吃健康的食品,多运动等。

【金点模板】

一、开头

参考句式:

1.Nowadays, because of the fast pace of life, more and more people like eating fast food.

2.Today, people are busy with their work, so they always eat some fast food.

3.In order to save time, many people like eating fast food.

4.Because of the fast pace of life, people have to eat more fast food and have no time to take exercise.

二、主体

参考句式:

1.How can we keep fit?

2.What is the good way to keep fit?

3.We must pay attention to our health.

4.First we should ...and then we should ...

5.The most important thing is ...

6.It is good for us to...

为使各项内容衔接自然,可以适当添加过渡词语。如:

firstly, secondly, thirdly ...

on one hand ...on the other hand ...

when, while, as ...

but, however ...

because, so, as a result ...

三、结尾

参考句式:

1.In a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit.

2.In short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise.

3.As is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be.

可用来表示总结的短语:

in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。

【范文点评】

How to Be Healthy?

①Today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food.Besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking.

②Because of these,more and more people are confronted with the threat of subhealth, for example, some can’t sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on.

③But how can we change these and keep fit?

④First, I think a healthy balanced diet is very important for everyone.Less meat, fatty and fast food, more vegetables and enough fruit are good for our health.

⑤Only when we are in a hurry can we have some junk food, but not often.Second,we should take enough exercise because exercise can keep us energetic all the time.

⑥In a word, the better we get into good eating habits and the more we take exercise, the healthier our bodies will be.

点评:

①with介词短语的使用增加了句子的灵活性。

②关联词使句子上下衔接自然。

③but领起下文,使文章自然过渡到作者要表达的内容。

④first,second序数词的使用使文章清晰地表达出要表达的观点。

⑤本句为以only开头的倒装句。不同句式的使用显示出深厚的语言功底,使文章增色不少。

⑥总结句的使用使文章首尾呼应,内容充实圆满。

【类题尝试】

当今,有些家长选择用金钱奖励孩子在学习上的进步。请根据以下提示用英语写篇短文。

1.分析这种现象产生的原因及危害(工作繁忙,溺爱孩子,不利于孩子成长……);

2.你对这种现象的看法。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可根据内容适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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One possible version:

Nowadays more and more parents choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies.

Why? Most parents devote themselves to their careers due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children.However, I don’ t think this is a practical and wise choice.Firstly,

if children are always rewarded with money for high marks, their attention will be focused on money instead of the pleasure of studying.Some of them will stop working hard as soon as they get what they want.Secondly, too much money will spoil the children, for they are too young to use money properly.

I think a hug and a kiss will work better for children than money.Money may do them more harm than good.